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rachelredbum
Female Author
USA
Posts: 422		 #61 | Posted: 19 Mar 2013 20:26
PhilK:
Or "You wrote that whole story just to set up an appallingly cheesy pun in the last line?" (And yes, you know who you are....)

Actually that sounds like a good idea!

oh and thnks for the explanation, fi

Eiffel
Male Member
USA
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Posts: 21		 #62 | Posted: 20 Mar 2013 00:21
I rarely post negative stuff, unless the author really would benefit from it. We're all amateurs here, writing for fun, and if something isn't my taste, well so what.

The only time I say something critical is a case where I liked the story and thought I had some technical flaw, which is easily remedied.

jeffspanks
Male Member
USA
Posts: 5		 #63 | Posted: 22 Mar 2013 21:59
FiBlue
FiBlue:
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This varies by part of the South.

In some regions, "y'all" is plural. In others, it's singular, with "all y'all" being the plural.

And neither group seems to believe that the other group talks that way . . .

FiBlue
Female Author
USA
Posts: 613		 #64 | Posted: 22 Mar 2013 22:18
jeffspanks:
And neither group seems to believe that the other group talks that way . . .

I can quite honestly say that, in Alabama, I have never heard anyone say "y'all" when speaking to only one person. Only on television... lol

jools
Female Author
New_Zealand
Posts: 801		 #65 | Posted: 23 Mar 2013 01:44
jeffspanks:
In some regions, "y'all" is plural. In others, it's singular, with "all y'all" being the plural.

American is such an unusual language *teasing of course!

njrick
Male Author
USA
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Posts: 2975		 #66 | Posted: 23 Mar 2013 01:57
jools:
American is such an unusual language

"Y'all" isn't American; it's Southern.

jools
Female Author
New_Zealand
Posts: 801		 #67 | Posted: 23 Mar 2013 02:29
njrick:
it's Southern.

Ahh those Southern hemispheres! hehehe "Y'all r'member t'spank 'em y'hear?"

njrick
Male Author
USA
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Posts: 2975		 #68 | Posted: 23 Mar 2013 02:34
jools:
Ahh those Southern hemispheres! hehehe "Y'all r'member t'spank 'em y'hear?"

Hmmm... the 'only Southern' hemispheres I know are Janine's. Unless, of course, you're meaning Southern Hemisphere-ic southern hemispheres, in which case we're talking about YOURS.

gail
Female Author
Canada
Posts: 333		 #69 | Posted: 23 Mar 2013 07:28
jools:
Ahh those Southern hemispheres! hehehe "Y'all r'member t'spank 'em y'hear?"

bookworthy

jools
Female Author
New_Zealand
Posts: 801		 #70 | Posted: 23 Mar 2013 07:32
njrick:
Hmmm... the 'only Southern' hemispheres I know are Janine's. Unless, of course, you're meaning Southern Hemisphere-ic southern hemispheres, in which case we're talking about YOURS.

well the 2 j's wil have to watch out then!!!

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