NJRick's "Obscure Story-Reading" Challenge

Xmas Story: Cinderella by Malahide


Clever short variation on the Cinderella story. Fun quick read.

Paula, Parts 1 -7 by Tim Starfield

This is a very erotic serial about a Modern Day master and apprentice slave. Nicely written. It ends rather abruptly and needs to be continued. The ending leave us and Paula hanging.

The Interpretation of Dreams by John Benson

This is about a dream clinic where girls come to relieve the guilt and confusion brought on by their dreams of spanking and other things. But the clinic isn't what it seems and the girls aren't necessarily the ones who benefit.

The Old Sailor by opb

One of Ollie's charming AA Milne reworkings, scandalously neglected.

(I hope poems are allowed here)

Absolutely! (even limericks)

I have to tell you Rick, your strategy is working. Usually when I select a lucky dip there are fewer and fewer stories w/out comment. Your plan is making a difference.
Islandcarol

There are about 800 fewer now
part of it is natural, and would likely have occurred on it's own, but I like to feel that this effort contributed to it - the effort and attention that EVERYONE has given it

I did a search for poems with zero comments (and was unhappy to find one of my own on the list).

I read and added comments to the following:
A Bratty New Year by Kephren

The Grinch Revised by Double_Trouble
Sticks nicely to the rhyme, meter, and style of the original. A tricky job well-done. Unfortunately it seems to stop in mid-story.

Nero by js_anon
Clever and fun. But if these are intended as limericks, the meter needs work.

Night Thoughts 2 by js_anon
A very interesting and well-tuned verse. Thanks.

The Shaming Of Lady Jessica by Count D'Sturges
An interesting and nicely written verse about a role-reversal. However, it seems to me that Lady Jess gave in rather too quickly to be plausible.

The Yells (After Poe) by js_anon
An exquisite variation on Poe's "The Bells", recalling the various types and varieties of yells given out by spankees. A very nice job, thanks.

Twelve Spanking Days Of Christmas by Kilahara
Not what i was expecting at all. I was expecting another take-off on the counting song "On the first day of Christmas my true love gave to me...

Instead this is a lovely and detailed verse recitation of the traditional associations and legends connected with each of the days of Christmas, and thier possible spanking aspects. Very well Done.

Dreamy Discipline by Firefly
A nicely turned verse about a most enjoyable episode.

Explained by opb
A very nice spankification of the AAM verse. Sometimes there is just no substitute for experience.

Therapy for the Therapist
By Steven

Short and amusing.

A New and Sensual Beginning
by Kilahara

A story about a first spanking. We are not told the nature of her offense, but she is compelled to have the spanking, and to have a particular man from her past give it to her.