Thanks so much Goodgulf, Seegee and njrick for your kind words about my 'Tilly' serial

. The story was a whole lot of fun to write actually so I'm glad you enjoyed it. The other reasons I think it bombed here is because it took a long while to get to the spanking scene so people quit out on it before they got there... or just read the spanking scene without the rest of the story surrounding it. They therefore missed the wider plot line, deeper aspects of the story and the moral.
The moral
I have learnt however, when writing stories for this site, is to put
more focus on the spanking scene or scenes yet still build believable characters and plot around it without taking too many pages to do so heheh!