For a long time, in my writing, I had tended not only to do the drawn out phonetic thing on such words, but also used the insertion of ellipses (...) to show pauses, and the "ums" and "ers" that that tend to be sprinkled throughout real speech. I've decided that, especially when overused (some people would, no doubt, say used at all), they tend to detract from a story (as FiBlue has pointed out). As a result, I try to be conscious of minimizing the inclusion of all three, trying instead to describe the spoken delivery, such as by "he said hesitantly," or "she whined." Perhaps it's a just lack of skill on my part, but I find that I can't eliminate the use of such devices entirely, just as I can't totally avoid using onomatopoe-ic words (did I just coin the adjective form?) such as "smack" or "whack," despite my attempts to limit their use. If you compared my earlier work with my later work, I think you'd agree that the latter is better due to my attention to this detail (not that I'm asking anybody to actually DO that). |