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Goodgulf
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#11 | Posted: 23 Oct 2023 07:20
eljefe:
Goodgulf, did you ever consider posting Break of a Lifetime here, or did you think it wandered too far off topic?

That story is here now. It's not in the library per se, but it is available at:
https://www.lsfpublications.com/index.php?id=1257

The title is now: Carnacki Correctional Institute for Women
Break of a Lifetime was a bit ambiguous for a title, and the story is set at the " Carnacki Correctional Institute for Women", and that became a better title. Parts of it have been rewritten, replacing humiliation with more spanking.

Jane, a newly qualified journalist, is desperate to find a job. Intending to write an exclusive story about a famous former teen starlet who, according to rumour, is incarcerated at the Carnacki Correctional Institute for Women, she tries unsuccessfully to arrange a visit. Eventually her perseverance pays off and she and her friend Trish end up at the Carnacki Institute, disguised as inmates. To avoid blowing their cover, the two young women have to attend classes run by strict staff who don't hesitate to use corporal punishment for the smallest infraction. Jane does manage to locate the former starlet and do an interview in return for sexual favours, but is crushed when her release date is quashed and she is forced to spend additional time at the institute. She slowly learns what really goes on in this place, and is at the mercy of rich and powerful men, many of whom attend Punishment Night. To her horror, Jane is secured to a punishment horse for a whipping... and that is only the beginning of her ordeal.

Moody
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#12 | Posted: 28 Oct 2023 12:13
@ Goodgulf

Carnacki is one of my favorite ebooks. A follow up story where you tell us more of Jane's path and how she copes with it would be nice.

The Facility stories were nice too. To be honest I like 'light' stories that have kind of a happy ending.

I still think that 'A Computer Glitch' from watcher is my favorite reformatory tale. Once you reach the end,you totally have to rework the image you got of the brat Amanda.

Looking at your judical stories I get the impression that you left the Jedi path and are navigating the Sith path now.

Goodgulf
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#13 | Posted: 29 Oct 2023 02:06
None of my judicial tales have been flagged as dark the way "Cinderella & The Slave Girls", Sometimes I write dark, other times I write light. It depends on how the mood takes me.

Moody
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#14 | Posted: 29 Oct 2023 08:09
@ Goodgulf

Is there a definition of DARK and LIGHT anywhere?
For me a dark tale is when the main character who is most likely the one getting your affection is worse off at the end than prior to the story Or in case of judicial stories looses his/her freedom or gets harshly punished leaving him/her with scars.
Others might consider it light since he/she managed to satisfy his/her curiosity.

Well that might depend on nationality. In German He/She would be considered rude since you are supposed to put females first. In Anglo-American societies I have learned it's the opposite way around since females were considered insignificant and a woman became the property of her husband 200 years ago. It took me quite some time until I wrote 'Dear Sir or Madam,' at the start of a letter not to mention that you continue with a capital letter after the comma in the next line.

KelvinB
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#15 | Posted: 29 Oct 2023 09:18
If you enjoy a severe judicial caning theme in a prison, you may wish to give Tale Of Temasek a read.
This is the first, and only, story I have ever crafted.

Moody
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#16 | Posted: 29 Oct 2023 21:04
@ KelvinB
Actually the mention of a severe corporal punishment that stays within its boundaryis enough for me. It simply needs to stay responsible and should match the crime that evoked it. I don't need a vivid description of the cane hitting the backside of the culprit getting punished and how the resulting tramlines develop.
Example:
In a school setting the culprits share a beer for the boys or a wine for the girls (to make it more hideous, cheap wine out of a box) and lack the smarts for it. Result they are caught. Some authors will describe each and every stroke in great detail, but I am happy with the short description of six of the best. There is no need to describe a bakers dozen in all its glory.
Let's say they are secondary school 5th formers age 16 then we would have a legal problem in Germany. From a video on difference Germany-USA. The 20 year old American was whining that German teens age 16 can legally buy and drink beer. With legal guardian present even drink beer at age 14 without brown bagging.

PGreenham
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#17 | Posted: 30 Oct 2023 12:46
You might enjoy one of my most recent stories, Visa Infringement which features a young Aussie women given 28 days detention during which is suffers a caning. PG

etbyrd
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#18 | Posted: 2 Nov 2023 21:58
You might enjoy one of mine called The Humbling of Leah S.

Tiredny
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#19 | Posted: 25 Nov 2023 21:52
Not really a "story", but you'll find a newpaper clipping about the corporal punishment applied to rioters in 1948 at the Andrew Mercer Reformatory for Women (in Toronto, Canada) at the site below:

Strict Spanking

Once at the site scroll down to the post about Mercer.

On the same site, you'll find a post about Justice Weekly, a Canadian tabloid publication. In the "read more" section of that post, you'll find a letter from a purported ex-inmate from Mercer in which she details the punishment she received while at Mercer.

Enjoy...
Tired

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