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Tiredny
Male Author

USA
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#41 | Posted: 3 Aug 2018 05:49
RosieRad:
A lot of the stories that knock around in my head are set in harsh reformatories, but I haven't written those down. (Most of them would offend the average sensibilities of readers -- my personal fantasies are often "too harsh" and don't translate well from imagination to words.).

I have one very short story (vignette really) here called "Wicked" that describes a harsh punishment of a young lady who found herself incarcerated in a long-ago "dungeon", and my Mary serials are set in a girls school that isn't quite a reformatory, but is a "last chance" school for difficult girls, where CP is used liberally. (My author name is Rosie Radcliffe)

Well, Rosie, I certainly liked your "Wicked" story! I do agree with you, however, that harsh corporal punishment stories are a tad over the top for many readers here. When I was first introduced to erotic chastisement, it was by authors like Dedeaux, Pyx, Manton, Rawlings, etc. Those works still appeal to me.

What I find interesting is how many of the more "modern" writers, Rollin, Devlin, Alex, etc, went the other way. That is, they started out with harsh punishment stories, but morphed into rather mild spanking stories. My suspicion is that's where the money is, so that's where the professionals go.

There are sites on the web where severe stories are encouraged and appreciated. Unfortunately, severe stories like those of Dedeaux, Manton and Pyx are considered way, way too mild!

All things considered, I think LSF does a good job of allowing a wide breadth of themes. Further their coding system allows you to avoid those stories that would not interest you. Thus, Rosie, you should put those stories to "paper" for you will never placate your demons until you do. Then post here and I can guarantee you one avid reader.

Regards,
Tired

RosieRad
Female Author

USA
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#42 | Posted: 3 Aug 2018 21:57
Thanks Tired. I'm glad you enjoyed Wicked, and perhaps one day I will write up some more of my imagined stories. However, when I write down a story, I like it to be more than "just" a bunch of harsh punishments, and I find it harder to make a good story out of some of my harsher reformatory fantasies. (And many of my fantasies contain other punishments that don't fit the site criteria.) I have several other half-finished stories and serials in my "queue" but unfortunately have not really had time for my writing here of late. One day...

Somebody popped me over 20K views last night, perhaps it was you

peterfrost
Male Member

England
Posts: 5
#43 | Posted: 28 Aug 2018 14:48
A number of authors contributed to the well known Mrs Birch's Classic Literary Collection . The stories are F/M with young men being being treated and punished as youngsters by ladies, I wonder if anyone has seen any other stories by these authors i.e. Scotia writer of the Derek Brady stories, Zeitgeist and Sonny Boy Jacobsen.

eljefe
Male Author

USA
Posts: 22
#44 | Posted: 12 Jun 2019 08:06
A common theme for many judicial stories is a "Judicial Punishment Center" where convicted criminals report for a booty blistering. In many of these stories, once the miscreant checks in, he or she can't check out until the sentence is served in full. In that sense, they might as well be prison or reformatory stories, although the term locked up might only be a day or only a few hours.

Prison/reformatory punishments have two main flavors. The first is when the sentence imposed includes corporal punishment, and either a short institutional stay is needed to "properly prepare" the convict for the ordeal, or the sentence includes both a whupping and a custodial term.

"Sherry's day was ruined when she glanced at the calendar. She'd managed to successfully push her impending punishment from her mind the previous day, pretending with all her might that it was just an ordinary day inside instead of the last day her backside would be unmarked. But today was the 14th, the dreaded circled 14th, when they'd be taking her to medical before noon instead of serving her breakfast. 24 strokes, the judge had said, a high price for a purloined watch. She wondered if she'd be able to sleep tonight with the distraction of aching buttocks. It would be on her tummy and with her state-issued PJs pullled down to expose her buns to the cooling night air if she managed it at all."

The other type is when a rump roasting is administered for a violation of institutional rules.

"Inmate Johnson, you've heard the evidence against you. How do you answer the charge that you struck another inmate without provocation?"

"The bitch had it coming." Melissa stared at the hearing officer, still angry at how it had played out. 'No provocation, my ass,' she thought. Unfortunately, it was to be literally her ass.

"Well, if that is your statement, I am deciding your sanction at 30 days solitary confinement, and 12 lashes on the bare buttocks with the prison cat. Officers, take her away."

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