I concur fully with what has been said about having good characters,plot,style and so forth in a story. A spanking story is like any other kind of story;either it is well-written or it is not. I certainly agree about how endless repetition of SMACK! and the like is poor writing,and I think it shows either lack of imagination or laziness on the part of the writer. I like at least some degree of plausibility in the story, and if it is a discipline story that the punishment be deserved. Being falsely accused or mistaken for someone else,and spanked,generally a turn-off. An exception would be a twin switch plot,where one twin pretends to be the other,not knowing she has a spanking coming. I so love the idea of bratty Jessica Wakefield one of the Sweet Valley High twins being spanked when she is caught posing as her responsible sister Elizabeth. Have mentioned in other threads or story comments that I do not like explicit sex in stories,or father/daughter or mother/son domestic discipline stories. Nor do I care for stories of spanking very young children. Teens yes,and even the age group called " tweens" if they are sufficiently bratty. Totally love maternal discipline of adult daughters. Definitely prefer F/ F and M/F. Somehow most F/M does not appeal to me, unless its something like a cheating spouse being involved. Likewise M/M which I confess have not read much of. Do think non sexual M/M domestic discipline would be something I might enjoy more of. Like a story where a dad applies a paddle to speedo-clad bottom of an errant teenage son(counterpoint to mom paddling bikini-clad daughter). I like variety in describing spankees,like what they are wearing and so forth. Have often said too often the story involves a dress being raised and panties down. That might be fine for a period piece,from a time when women were almost always dressed like that, but not necessarily in the present. And I may have mentioned I love stories where a woman or girl wearing scanty,revealing,or provocative clothes gets spanked, whether its just for dressing like that,or a case where she gets spanked for some other reason and happens to be wearing something that leaves her bottom poorly protected. Stories where a woman is wearing thong underwear or a thong bathing suit and gets spanked,regardless of why,are at the top of my list of favorites.Not however if the story is supposed to take place in the past. Once read a story at Classics where a husband spanked his wife for wearing a revealing bikini in public.Problem was story was set in the 50s and bathing suits that exposed the buttocks were not around then. If you write a story set in the past, get details right. Would add that I don't like stories that involve really brutal punishment,floggings and the like,something that occurs all to often in judicial punishment stories. And obviously no rape or torture. Really like stories ending with some description of what it was like afterwards. Did the one spanked realize that she had suffered the consequences of her actions,her feelings about what happened, and so on. And by all means,especially if its a hard or severe spanking,mention or description of the physical results,the condition of her bottom,pain,soreness,etc. And delighted if there is mention of how she dealt with the matter of sitting,like saying she sat on a pillow or cushion, slept on her stomach,ate standing up etc. There is one of Rollin's stories that ends with the recipients of a strapping eating supper off the mantel.That is a great old spanking threat "have to eat off the mantelpiece" that does not seem to be used much in spanking stories now.At the very least would be a change from the common " won't sit down for a week" phrase. By no means do I only read discipline stories.I like lighthearted "fun" stories too. The same standards about plot,style,etc still apply. Whimsey though can be difficult to write. Have to carry the impression throughout the piece that the spanking is nothing but fun,and maybe have a twist ending, like my story "Birthday Bikini,Birthday Spanking."Won't give away the plot but it is neither punishment nor even "loving discipline" in the ending. While I enjoy stories set in all sorts of times and places,find that on the whole get into those that are more familiar. For example,British school stories with the cane are less appealing than American school paddlings(unless they are the ridiculous ones that involve the totally divorced from reality bare bottom paddlings in the classroom and the like). I think of American spankings being with the paddle,hairbrush,strap,belt,switch,not the cane unless you have people that live a serious spanko lifestyle. This is a really interesting and informative thread. We do have some serious readers here. |