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dicyverges
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Italy
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#1 | Posted: 24 Apr 2010 07:43
Hi,
I'm very interested in stories F/m.
I would find in them more descriptions about buttock's shape and size.
I think that a man/boy with full prominent almost feminine backside spanked by a severe girl or woman feel more humiliation...
what do you think about?

PS i wrote a series in italien is it possible to post it in the library?

flopsybunny
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England
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#2 | Posted: 24 Apr 2010 09:28
dicyverges:
PS i wrote a series in italien is it possible to post it in the library?

We only have English language stories posted here, dicyverges.

flopsy

dicyverges
Male Member

Italy
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#3 | Posted: 24 Apr 2010 14:08
thanks, i keep enjoing reading your stories.

Sebastian
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USA
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#4 | Posted: 25 Apr 2010 00:22
So...Why not translated your stories into English. That shouldn't be a problem.

dicyverges
Male Member

Italy
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#5 | Posted: 27 Apr 2010 16:07
it's very difficult for me to translate in english my stories, as a writer of spanking , i like to spend more words to describe the situations and the intimate feelings of the characters involved in....

Sebastian
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USA
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#6 | Posted: 28 Apr 2010 00:24
But...aren't there programs that will translate any language to English? I didn't mean that you should translate these stories.

Goodgulf
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Canada
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#7 | Posted: 28 Apr 2010 06:46
Most translation programs produce laughable results. There are just too many idioms that require a real person to translate. I've played the game of going to a translation site and translating English to ... (whatever) then translating the resulting text back to English, and the results are usually humorous.

For example, I took what was once the standard typing test:
"Now is the time for all good men come to the aid of their country"

and translated it to French and back to English. That produced:

"The time has come for all men come to him with their country."

No, it's not even close to the original meaning.

Maybe there is good translating software out there - but if there it's not on the net for free. What we have is babelfish and Babblefish - and they mangle the meanings of the text.

Goodgulf

dicyverges
Male Member

Italy
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#8 | Posted: 29 Apr 2010 16:52
you said exactly what's the matter ..i need a real person to translate my stories, a person who share with me this particular obsession i wrote a short story in french, maybe somebody in the forum would translate it in english? I could post it

chandra
Female Member

India
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#9 | Posted: 3 Jun 2015 13:39
Diverges wants stories mentioning buttocks. I agree with him. Description of the shape and structure of buttocks, before and after spanking.has lot of erotic value. I also wonder why present day writers feel shy in writing BUTTOCKS. They rather use the term bottom pr backside instead which does not give the same kick so Io say. Is the term buttocks considered obscene? In India.the word is freely used during mutual conversation........Chandra

kdpierre
Male Author

USA
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#10 | Posted: 3 Jun 2015 14:31
chandra
Chandra, as a writer I tend to use 'butt', 'bottom', & 'behind' far more than 'buttocks' because in all honesty, not too many people USE 'buttocks' much anymore. I do use it but usually when I'm being 'narratively descriptive'.....never in a character's conversation. There is nothing obscene in the term, but neither does it have the same tingly connotation that 'bottom' does.

Also...dicyverges, if you like butt descriptions and F/m, please try "Crushed". There's a rather extensive paragraph describing the behind of a boy being spanked by a girl who never spanked anyone before and who was enjoying seeing a bare behind right on her own lap.

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