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rollin
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#21 | Posted: 19 Mar 2012 18:43
frost977:
but would like to see it in text. told from the point of view of one of the women, ( i don't really like F/m stories told from the boys first person pov) but they are hard to find. or at least from the point of view of the "camera" the way a movie does. third person. but i prefere from the pov of one of the girls who are enjoying themselves. its all about having his bottom bared up in the air to expose and play with.

Well, I had to think about this one, and I'll preface this by saying it's probably not 100% on point, but....you might check out MASTER'S THESIS, STRIPES, the f/m portions of THE PADDLING BOOTH, and parts 2 and 11 of GWEN'S SORORITY DAYS and part 6 of A GUY AT GIRL'S POKER NIGHT.

spankdaddy
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#22 | Posted: 21 Mar 2012 12:29
I remember reading a school setting story where the whole class gets spanked because the teacher finds a mouse in her lunch box and no one will own up to who put it there. When I read this story I found it turned me on because now 15 students were described getting their bottoms spanked and not just the guilty party. The author described one by one as each student took his or her swats. I forget the name of the story but it was stimulating to me.

jimisim
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#23 | Posted: 21 Mar 2012 12:59
This theme has given me an idea for a future story, I shall endeavour to write an unfair adult non-school story.
This is easy in the school format-most if not all of my whackings at school were unfair!(:- It will be more difficult to write in the adult format but I'll try.
I really like Flogmaster's series of Oops.
BTW Don't expect it quickly I have a backlog of part completed stories and taking Zireska to its conclusion won't be quick! But it might be a light-hearted interlude if I get bogged down.

Goodgulf
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#24 | Posted: 21 Mar 2012 18:50
I wrote one where the point of the spanking was to show the person that life wasn't fair. The girl wants to be a wizard and the3 one person who can make that happen won't consider it unless he spanks for for no reason other to impress on her that life isn't fair.

It's in the library as:
Did You Want To Be A Wizard?

Goodgulf

frost977
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#25 | Posted: 21 Mar 2012 20:27
i usually never read the F/M storys, in my mind with these kind of storys the m is 10-17,

with the primary (the girl who set him up with help of the teacher, who is granted spanking privilages there after 1 -2 years older than he is. maybe with a few close girl friends who get to watch now and then)

if every one is an adult i am M/F , i have in my head the same situation that i out lined in my first post or two where it is an all girls school and a Male teacher, and the perfect who set up the innocent girl is just as interested as seeing her bottom smacked. and pov from the story is open and the girls are 18.

but in the F/m i never read it if it is the guy telling the story, only if it is from one of the females POV, and if he is in that age range. i think it all goes back to I think everyone kinda sees themselves involved in these stories when they read them.

frost977
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#26 | Posted: 21 Mar 2012 20:31
spankdaddy
i remember one like this where it was an all girls school, and it was cheating on a test, the teacher had all 15-20 girls bend over the front of their own desk then flip up their skirts and drop the back of there nickers so that one girl was staring at another bare bottom, while waiting and sometimes watching the girl in front of her get it with the paddle

JohnS47
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#27 | Posted: 22 Mar 2012 14:48
Being spanked unfairly has been something that I've used in several stories. My stories usually involve basically good girls who have never been spanked but secretly want to be. My female disciplinarians are basically the same. They are fair minded, loving women who secretly want to spank. So some unfairness, trumped up charges, etc. are necessary to make these spankings actually happen. Despite the unfairness, I always try to portray a respect between these women. Like someone said earlier, its all just fantasy. Sometimes its great to read a story where the spanking was justly served, other times its good to read about one given for more frivolous reasons. But unfairness is the thing that is probably the most frequent negative comment I get on my stories.

Hotspur
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#28 | Posted: 22 Mar 2012 15:57
As I've mentioned before the cane and slipper were frequently used when I attended school in South London back in the 50's – 60's. The spankings were often undeserved as teachers sometimes seemed to think that it was simply about time somebody needed to be whacked. The next one to step out of line got it but maybe for some trivial offence. It was simply a way of demonstrating their authority.

It's a little like a football match where the referee is losing control so the next player to commit a foul goes into the book.

A good referee doesn't need to use such tactics and nor does a good teacher.

cayenne
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#29 | Posted: 22 Mar 2012 21:03
Hotspur:
As I've mentioned before the cane and slipper were frequently used when I attended school in South London back in the 50's – 60's. The spankings were often undeserved

Yes, that was an experience many of us had. In my case, it carried into the early '70s. I remember the outrage I felt at the arbitrariness and unfairness of it all. Above all, I consider myself a very fair and liberal person. But here in the land of fantasy, unfairness in stories can be a real turn on. Such is the paradox of my spankaholic existence. I used to feel guilty about it, but now I just accept my peccadilloes and go with the flow.

frost977
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#30 | Posted: 12 Apr 2012 22:40
what about blackmail stories? especially M/f where its a younger male, maybe a babysitter or teacher who gets the tables turned...

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