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CrimsonKidCK
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#11 | Posted: 16 Mar 2012 21:28
cayenne:
Here in fantasy, I find an element of unfairness in a story quite a turn-on. My kink is for adult/adult stories, and in these unfairness can be a difficult concept to weave into a story. Does anyone else share my enthusiasm?

Ahhhh, IME it can be enjoyable either way...

Usually I prefer a story in which the spankee is getting his/her deserved comeuppance for misconduct, disobedience, immature behavior, etc., one with a moral lesson involved.

However, life isn't always fair while disciplinary relationships can be one-sided and sometimes even explotive--and AFAIC it's often fun to read or write about such a situation, whether it occurs accidentally or with intent, either playful or malicious. (I tend to like sweet, affectionate yet devilishly-tricky female spankers.)

Of course, there occasionally are seemingly 'unfair' butt-blisterings administered in which the 'victim' wouldn't really want it any other way, down deep in his/her psyche, even though he/she "doth protest too much" on the surface.

"When is such-and-such a character going to get his/her own bare bottom paddled for being manipulative (or overly judgemental)?"

Well, my response to that sort of question tends to be, "Don't hold your breath..." --C.K.

SNM
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#12 | Posted: 17 Mar 2012 03:38
Unfairness or abuse can make for a fun story, in some cases. If I had to armchair-psychologist on the hows and whys of it, I'd say that the spanking kink is largely about power exchange, and stories where someone innocent gets manipulated or cheated into a spanking show a very clear demonstration of power. "I can do this to you just because I want to."

Does that sound terrible? Yes.

Is it actually terrible? I might actually write an article to explain my answer to that question.

beth83
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#13 | Posted: 17 Mar 2012 05:34
Mostly, I prefer stories where the spankee has clearly earned the spanking. A case of mistaken identity can be a fun read, too. I've written only one really unfair spanking story - I Heart Weed, and that was a bit of a challenge for me. That is probably due to the fact that I write the kind of stories that I like to read.

islandcarol
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#14 | Posted: 18 Mar 2012 03:34
It is interesting when I note a hot button issue like fairness and read your responses. I understand them all; even view them as reasonable. Maybe that is because there is not a hard and fast, black and white correct answer.

We are all human, make mistakes, tend to place ourselves in a character's situation and impose our own point of view. I prefer justice. But then I remember that this is fiction. It is supposed to be fun and no one on this site is obligated to promote my sense of ethos.

How boring life would be if everyone was perfectly well behaved all the time. Let the villain be the victor every once in a while. The order of the universe will collapse into chaos.

frost977
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#15 | Posted: 18 Mar 2012 05:38
I guess for me i depends on the story type if it is M/f or F/m with M/f is is all good,

with F/m since i think we all tend to put our self in the story, i tend to prefere spankings told from the females point of view, that the boys bottom is there for the entertainment of the female spanker and any female witnesses. the offense is simply an excuse to bare a boys bottom and slap it. (i tend to prefere hand only)
the storys are hard to find....

with the boy in the teen range and mostly older girls.

for example an idea that keeps flashing through my head is this. a 16 year old boy (where extenuating circumstances) place him in an all girls school.

you have the teacher an attractive 30-40 something and a 17-18 year old gilr (who is a perfect/teachers aid)

who with collaboration with the teacher stole the boys homework, but he did not know it until he came to class monday morning, with a new rule change where the school staff and a few students whos mothers work on the school board (ie the 17 year old girl) the old rule has 2-3 swats with a paddle on the pants in the hall or office. the new rule all offenses even something small like not turning in homework are bare bottom , in front of the class.

the teacher & girl put this together to get a shot at the boys bottom. the teacher holds off on announcing the rule change until near the end of class, and calls the boy up to the front of the room, and there announces the rule change, 1st saying that the new rule calls for all spankings are pants down, and has him put his hands on his head while she takes his trousers down to his knees, then ether has him bend over the desk or otk, and then once in position, and allowing those in the back of the room to stand for a better look, informs the boy and the class that the rule actually states that all spanking shall be on the bare bottom, and whisks his underpants down to his knees, giving every one a birds eye view of his bottom.

which for the teacher and the girl, and most of the class the boys bottom is all that exsists and the teach begins to spank, and maybe even play with his bottom a bit, just enjoying her self, with all comments from her to him letting him know how on display is bottom is as it bounces around for the class.


the girl is granted spanking privlages at some point and other women( PE teacher, some of the ladys around town) get a crack at his bottom over the next year or two. with the story or stories all told from one of the women or girls who are enjoying it. the teach or the girl sitting in the front row who stole his homework with the teachers help to set him up for this.

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#16 | Posted: 18 Mar 2012 15:43
frost977:
the teacher & girl put this together to get a shot at the boys bottom. the teacher holds off on announcing the rule change until near the end of class, and calls the boy up to the front of the room, and there announces the rule change, 1st saying that the new rule calls for all spankings are pants down, and has him put his hands on his head while she takes his trousers down to his knees, then ether has him bend over the desk or otk, and then once in position, and allowing those in the back of the room to stand for a better look, informs the boy and the class that the rule actually states that all spanking shall be on the bare bottom, and whisks his underpants down to his knees, giving every one a birds eye view of his bottom.

which for the teacher and the girl, and most of the class the boys bottom is all that exsists and the teach begins to spank, and maybe even play with his bottom a bit, just enjoying her self, with all comments from her to him letting him know how on display is bottom is as it bounces around for the class.

You're not listed as an author here...I suppose you wouldn't like to break into the 'writing ranks' via a serial featuring this idea, hmmmm?

If I didn't have a half-dozen or more incomplete serial stories, I'd try it myself at some point. I've read somewhat similar stories, but it's still a very appealing idea, a school full of females (teachers, pupils, administrators) conspiring to keep one young male red-bottomed and embarrassed.

http://boyzbeingboyz.com/comic25.php?layout=normal

If you can activate this link, it should take you to an illustrated Ron Wilson story ("Philip's Perils") on the 'BoyzBeingBoyz' website that has a plotline somewhat similar to yours, except that the boy is a worker at the school, sentenced there for some sort of delinquency--but he gets plenty of bare-bottom blisterings from various females... --C.K.

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#17 | Posted: 19 Mar 2012 00:08
cayenne
Cayenne, if you think your enthusiasm for using unfairness in a story determines you a 'sick'...then I must be terminally ill. I love to use that in stories..someone punished for something they didn't do. For me, it makes the story more compelling. Also, it gives a great opportunity for some revenge. Hey, the world is unfair, no reason spanking stories should be any different. Keep using it, Cayenne.

frost977
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#18 | Posted: 19 Mar 2012 01:41
"""frost977:
the teacher & girl put this together to get a shot at the boys bottom. the teacher holds off on announcing the rule change until near the end of class, and calls the boy up to the front of the room, and there announces the rule change, 1st saying that the new rule calls for all spankings are pants down, and has him put his hands on his head while she takes his trousers down to his knees, then ether has him bend over the desk or otk, and then once in position, and allowing those in the back of the room to stand for a better look, informs the boy and the class that the rule actually states that all spanking shall be on the bare bottom, and whisks his underpants down to his knees, giving every one a birds eye view of his bottom.

which for the teacher and the girl, and most of the class the boys bottom is all that exsists and the teach begins to spank, and maybe even play with his bottom a bit, just enjoying her self, with all comments from her to him letting him know how on display is bottom is as it bounces around for the class.

You're not listed as an author here...I suppose you wouldn't like to break into the 'writing ranks' via a serial featuring this idea, hmmmm?

If I didn't have a half-dozen or more incomplete serial stories, I'd try it myself at some point. I've read somewhat similar stories, but it's still a very appealing idea, a school full of females (teachers, pupils, administrators) conspiring to keep one young male red-bottomed and embarrassed."""


not sure how to quote on this forums. I am not likely to ever put the story to text, but would like to see it in text. told from the point of view of one of the women, ( i don't really like F/m stories told from the boys first person pov) but they are hard to find. or at least from the point of view of the "camera" the way a movie does. third person. but i prefere from the pov of one of the girls who are enjoying themselves. its all about having his bottom bared up in the air to expose and play with.

SNM
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#19 | Posted: 19 Mar 2012 02:03
frost977:
not sure how to quote on this forums.

To quote a post, highlight the text you want and click the "quote" button at the top of the post.

frost977:
not sure how to quote on this forums. I am not likely to ever put the story to text, but would like to see it in text. told from the point of view of one of the women, ( i don't really like F/m stories told from the boys first person pov) but they are hard to find. or at least from the point of view of the "camera" the way a movie does. third person. but i prefere from the pov of one of the girls who are enjoying themselves. its all about having his bottom bared up in the air to expose and play with.

tfs wrote an F/M, older-woman-unfairly-spanks-a-teenager-who-she-lusts-after story, from the woman's perspective. Its called "A (Young) Man Around the House."

I also have several ideas in mind for female-perspective F/M stories. Hopefully I'll write one soon.

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#20 | Posted: 19 Mar 2012 16:51
SNM:
Unfairness or abuse can make for a fun story, in some cases. If I had to armchair-psychologist on the hows and whys of it, I'd say that the spanking kink is largely about power exchange, and stories where someone innocent gets manipulated or cheated into a spanking show a very clear demonstration of power. "I can do this to you just because I want to."Does that sound terrible? Yes. Is it actually terrible? I might actually write an article to explain my answer to that question.

In r/l, a girl about to be spanked - or indeed, being spanked - may often protest "But it's not fair!", which always amuses me. My reponse is usually along the lines of "Unfair? Well, of course it is. You want fair? Try vanilla."

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