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Wheatwine
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#1 | Posted: 20 Dec 2014 23:17
There was a spanking scene in a serial I'm reading on another web site. A man came into a LOT of money and bought himself, his girlfriend, and his girlfriend's daughter a car. The daughter choose a powerful, fast car. A few days later, he found out she had been arrested after being clocked by the police for going 153 mph. When he and his girlfriend got the daughter home, his girlfriend asked him to give her daughter a bare bottomed spanking. He agreed, and gave her 5 licks with a wooden spoon. I don't know if any of you would want to read a long story (1241 kb so far and still not finished) for one spanking scene. On request, and with the permission of the administration of this site I will post the name of the story, and the website it's on.

PhilK
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#2 | Posted: 22 Dec 2014 10:19
If it was a proper spanking, it might be worth ploughing through the rest of the story. But five swats? That's not even the start of a spanking. She should have got 153 at the very least.

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#3 | Posted: 22 Dec 2014 16:05
Have to agree with Phil. Hardly qualifies as a spanking story if it takes 1241kb to get 5 smacks with a wooden spoon, 153 for starters!

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#4 | Posted: 23 Dec 2014 06:47
If the build up is there, then it could be good.

I've read some of Sharon Green's old sci-fi novels (written back when you could include spanking in mainstream novels - something that was quashed for a time by the alliance that stopped the Gor novels) where there are very few pages devoted to spanking - but a wonderful build up that made those stories special. Hints that a spanking could happen, threats (joking or otherwise) about spanking, a relationship slowly building between two characters where a spanking could easily happen...

Let's leave it at me saying that they were good novels. Oh, and if anyone wants to know more about those novels, you could start with "Mind Guest: Diana Santee, Spaceways Agent #1" (by Sharon Green). It's about a female James Bond type agent named Diana Santee (she works for the Spaceways Interstellar Agency) who spends most of the book trying to pretend to be a princess on a primate planet. The "mind guest" is a persona implanted in her mind to help her act the role of a princess, which can be hard to turn off - especially if the "princess persona" thinks she needs a spanking. No, there aren't many spankings in the novel, maybe 2 or 3 at most, but it is wonderful example of a mainstream novel with spanking in it.

rollin
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#5 | Posted: 23 Dec 2014 23:03
Somebody must have noticed that aspect of Sharon Green novels because she went on to publish under the Blushing Books banner. Titles like "Hidden Worlds" and "The Queen Brat" were sci-fi offerings with more than a bit of spanking erotica. I don't think she is writing today, at least not in the spanking romance genre. Her "Mind Guest" was an influence on a sci-fi novel I wrote and published last year.

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#6 | Posted: 23 Dec 2014 23:31
Wilbur Smith did one of the best spanking scenes I've seen in a mainstream novel in A Sparrow Falls. He mentioned spanking in more than a few of his books. I think he may have a been a spanko. I'm convinced Robert Jordan (author of The Wheel of Time series) there were so many spankings in A Knife of Dreams that it could have been titled Egwene Gets Spanked or Fifty Shades of The Wheel of Time.

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#7 | Posted: 29 Dec 2014 03:59
Update: The spanked girl confessed in today's chapters that she had actually been going 200 miles per hour, but had seen the cop and braked so she was "only" going 153 mph when the radar was turned on her. No further spanking was given, but her Mom plans to take her fast cars away, and buy her something like a Kia. She probably won't be driving for awhile anyway, as she spilled some water while helping in the kitchen, then slipped in it breaking her right leg. The doctor said she would be in a cast for 5-6 weeks.

watcher123
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#8 | Posted: 3 Jan 2015 00:00
As Seegee mentioned the Wheel of Time series had a lots of references. Matt one of the main heroes gets a few swats on his bottom from his then Aiel girlfriend and the Mistress of Novices of the Aes Sedai had a fearsome strap she was not afraid to use on the bottom of her charges. There were even references to judicial birching unfortunately it was never shown.

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#9 | Posted: 6 Jan 2015 17:08
Goodgulf
Hey Goodgulf, can you recall which of Sharon Green 's novels have spankings in them besides Mind Guest?

Geoffrotull
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#10 | Posted: 10 Jan 2015 22:44
Speaking of spanko sci-fi, Robert Heinlein would certainly qualify. His characters seemed to be always punishing young ladies. Or even guys if you consider "Starship Troopers." (Not the Yes song, although a great one.)

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