Memorable Lines in Spanking Fiction

From THE MAGISTRATE by Goodgulf, where the titular character’s niece, Tracy, is ‘accidentally’ mixed in with a bunch of delinquents, and is strapped down over the punishment bench, with a bit between her teeth. Does anyone object to us beginning?

“Grunts and squeals arose from the waiting ‘culprits about to be on the receiving end of justice’, but they were ignored.”

I love this sentence. Tracy, entirely innocent of any crime, has now been reduced by the grammar of grouping into another culprit “on the receiving end of justice”, the phrase itself in quotes, to show the routine and unobjectionable nature of the sentence which is about to be executed.

Of course Tracy wiggles her bare bottom, and bites into her bit, and makes bug eyes, while she listens to the frightful sounds of the other girls being lashed. That is what delinquents do. And make no mistake about it: as the sentence makes clear, Tracy is now just another delinquent, and her naked bottom will be punished, the same as the rest.

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From THE TALK by Chard T, where Mrs. Brooks spanks her daughter Shelly, after she asks for it. In this sentence, Mrs. Brooks is surprised to find herself taking a strong sense of satisfaction as her sometimes defiant daughter sweats out her first bare bottom spanking:

“Mrs. Brooks wasn’t looking forward to administering the admittedly overdue discipline that was to follow very shortly, but she found to her surprise that she wasn’t exactly hating the pre-game show as much as she expected to.”

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From Kat’s Curiosity, by Tiptopper:

“Also, she had an away lacrosse game at another school on Saturday and she knew that everybody, including the spectators, would be sure to see the marks that Mr. Brewster had purposefully put lower on the back of her legs.”

I love the image of a freshly caned young woman in tight gym shorts being made to run back and forth across the sports field, wincing with every step, while the audience admires the precision of her Headmaster’s handiwork (bottom work?)

I am enjoying Dr. Keate's current series: NORTHERN GIRL OVERCOMES ADVERSITY

In part 2 we find the following line:

I know it's hard, when your bottom's so hot, but you must learn to get straight back to work after punishment.

This line sets the tone and expectations so well for those in service to this house.

From "Proxy," by KD Pierre:

Here's a bit of background, the mother of young-adult Ally addressing her husband (effectively Ally's stepfather) after her daughter has been granted full spanking authority over him:

"And just to make it official, since it's been awhile since you got a good roasting...why not change into your special jeans so Ally can give you a taste of what you can expect if you misbehave?"

(Those jeans leave the stepfather's mid-to-lower buttocks fully exposed for Ally to strap with a flexible slapper, while he's on all fours and she's standing beside him, facing his posterior.)

Ally just twisted in place with barely-contained glee. It was great to finally be considered a grownup...as long as you weren't a submissive one.

From a spanking standpoint, how true...!! --C.K.

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Why, thank you, CK!

From "Boss Lady, Part 20" by KFR:

"Now, mister male chauvinist, you're going to feel just how strong a woman can be!" she declared, showing him the hairbrush and then putting it to work, hard and fast.

Imagining it from the perspective of the formerly-arrogant male, that being naked and bent over the woman's knee after losing a tennis wager, this quote does give me shivers... --C.K.

"It's supposed to hurt."

- in many stories (some even written by authors other than me) when the spankee wails something like "it hurrrtssss!"

At the risk of a scurrillous self plug may I suggest, from Six and the Maiden the following. Not a one liner but hey!

Our heroine Lottie, (the possessor of the most beautiful bottom in the land) has been thrashed by a now dead enemy and asks her rescuer:
But why? Why did he whip me? Why not just…?” Lottie stalled; her tone had started calm, but the words tapered away, their load too heavy for her voice.
He turned and gave her a thousand-year-old look, “Y' really don't know?” She shook her head.
His eyelids drooped almost imperceptibly and a sigh whispered from his lips. “Coz a woman's arse is the most beautiful thing in the whole world, and yours...” he let the sentence hang as he turned to leave, not wanting to explain, not really knowing how to explain, except that the Great Author had arranged things that way, and he wasn't complaining.

Nice one OPB, reminds me of something I read in the mainstream press, a year or so ago--"the most beautiful places in the world are to be found on my wife's body".

Geoffrey Stirling.

My favourite line would have to come from my all time favourite story - "Cared Enough", by Goodgulf: "Mary did more than just hear new stories about that brush. Before she left that evening a bottom with a much darker shade of red was staring out of that corner, owned by a sobbing girl who had been reminded just how much her aunt loved her."

From "Paddle of the Bride, Part 1," by rick1463:

"Of course it will be *very* hard, Benny!" Beverly said, patting the boy's bare bottom with his trusty old paddle. "I always paddle you as hard as I can, don't you know that by now? Get ready for a big ol' whooping!"

Why expect anything otherwise...?? --C.K.