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lvancisic1
Female Author

USA
Posts: 55
#11 | Posted: 22 Dec 2015 18:18
hi yankee - never too late. I also love the theme of an older girl being spanked for the misbehavior of her younger siblings on the rationale that she was "in charge"

RosieCheeks
Female Member

England
Posts: 293
#12 | Posted: 23 Dec 2015 00:00
If you can imagine it, then as long as it meets the rules and criteria of LSF then i say if you wish to write it please do so, we all have our preferences, be that proportionate, harsh, unfair, historical, loving, or with a cunning twist at the end.

So there will always be readers who like your stories and those who prefer others, please keep posting, we readers are truly grateful.

I personally like a level of disproportionate discipline, that's just way my mind is wired. Fiction allows me to visit places that in the present politically correct society, it would be frowned upon to go to.

RosieRad
Female Author

USA
Posts: 385
#13 | Posted: 23 Dec 2015 07:09
Not sure if it's ok to plug one's own stories here, but one of my latest batch is in a category I'd consider "over the top". I am sometimes in the mood to read such stories as well, so I'll take a look at the other recommendations on this thread.

RyanRowland
Male Author

USA
Posts: 253
#14 | Posted: 24 Dec 2015 22:58
SNM:
While it can be satisfying seeing a deserving troublemaker get it, there's a much more illicit appeal in unjust scenarios. Where the spankee is punished disproportionately, or is set up for something s/he didn't even do.

I agree. Some of my fantasies can be quite sadistic in that regard. I just wrote a story which (on the surface seems to) fit that description, but may keep it to myself. It is so different from most of the lighter stuff I've written, I'm afraid some who might read it because they liked my other stories will be disappointed and find it distasteful.
Sometimes I wish there was a way to submit a story anonymously so readers won't have preconceived expectations.

Bogiephil1
Male Author

USA
Posts: 631
#15 | Posted: 25 Dec 2015 01:28
Talk to Februs or Flopsie. There's probably a way they can post it as a "guest" or something. As long as they know who you are...

smeple
Male Author

USA
Posts: 317
#16 | Posted: 25 Dec 2015 01:30
Put a note or disclaimer-type thing on it, Ryan, if it makes you feel more comfortable. But just submitting it without any disclaimer would be fine too. I think the readers here are smart enough to let you explore new avenues without judgement.

RyanRowland
Male Author

USA
Posts: 253
#17 | Posted: 25 Dec 2015 23:43
Bogiephil1:
Talk to Februs or Flopsie. There's probably a way they can post it as a "guest" or something. As long as they know who you are...

No, it's not that important, and I'm afraid that would be opening a Pandora's Box. There would be some others who wanted to do the same thing, you'd have to figure out how to handle the comments & statistics, then someone would want to change their mind and take credit for their story they previously posted anonymously, creating more problems, etc., etc. I have enough database experience to know what a logistical burden all that would turn into, and I'm sure Februs doesn't need any more headaches.
Smeple is right. Readers may like it or not. You can't please all the people all the time. I'll just have to think it over and decide to either submit it or keep it for my personal use. If I file it for a year or so, I might enjoy reading it again.

RosieRad
Female Author

USA
Posts: 385
#18 | Posted: 27 Dec 2015 05:48
For what it's worth, Ryan, I'd like to read it. I say post it with a disclaimer, if you're willing.

CrimsonKidCK
Male Author

USA
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#19 | Posted: 27 Dec 2015 07:53
lvancisic1:
I enjoy stories where the punishment administered is somewhat out of proportion to the transgression. Or an older girl is held responsible for the behavior of her younger siblings. One of my favorite themes is when a good, sweet, submissive girl makes one unwise choice and is soundly spanked. Perhaps many would feel that she should be cut some slack. Would love to hear how others feel about this.

Well, it's somewhat more likely to be a boy, or even an adult male, being soundly-to-severely bare-bottom blistered in one of my stories, but I do frequently promote the idea of a spankee being 'overspanked' relative to his/her offense, even though some degree of discipline would legitimately be deserved.

I'm especially fond of employing 'built-in' institutional and/or family biases which result in one group (usually males as a gender) being excessively chastised, often including extreme embarrassment, relative to the treatment of another more favored group (generally females), the first group's members being corporally corrected quite emphatically for 'offenses' that the second group's members are punished for much more mildly, or even not at all.

Sweet, shy, sensitive, typically well-behaved young ladies being given very thorough maternal spankings, which they sobbingly accept due to their cooperative nature, I appreciate that kind of a story line as well...

--C.K.

RyanRowland
Male Author

USA
Posts: 253
#20 | Posted: 6 Jan 2016 23:16
RosieRad:
For what it's worth, Ryan, I'd like to read it. I say post it with a disclaimer, if you're willing.

In case anyone wonders, the new story just loaded is *not* the one I referred to in this thread. I did submit the other one also at about the same time but requested that it be discarded if not suitable.

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