At the moment I am filling or at least trying to fill gaps in the story. The story is supposed to be a story of redemption of a mean girl turning ito a descend girl. I am aware that mean might be mean nowadays but normal behavior back then. I am aiming for 1880 since men were still at the top of the totem pole but women were slowly moving up beside him. In the 1880ies or was it 1890ies they were even allowed property.
Money When I read 'Pride and Prejudice 10-15 year ago. I was left aghast when Mr. Darcy's friend who has fallen for Elisabeth's sister and is of upper class breeding is said to have a yearly income of 10,000 pounds and that rumors are that Mr. Darcy has up to 20,000 pounds a year. Since I can't remember the exact numbers it might be that their income has to be halved but even the numbers I remember would make them look like paupers nowadays. Then I learned that in 2012 you had to multiply the amount by 100 and nowadays by 150. Thus Mr. Darcy would have a yearly income of 3 million pounds. Not poor but still not exactly super rich either. I read of the Opium Wars but it seems the English are drug addicts. The old Pound Stirling was measured by LSD. Not as for lysergid the mind altering substance but as in pound (L=libre), Shilling (S=solidi) and pence (D=denarii). In addition I learned the meaning of pence and penny. pence = the value while penny is the coin. And there I always thought pence was the penny before the penny.
Parents and kids Another thing that struck me as odd was the Mr. Bennet and Mrs. Bennet talk of Elizabeth's parents. This year I read 'The weaver takes a wife' and even after marriage she calls him Mr. Brundy while he as a more simple soul calls her 'elen which even might be insulting since she is of aristocratic origin. The question is would it be more proper if he called her Lady Helen? She at one point scolds someone that even after she lost her standing and is Mrs. Brundy now, she still is Lady Helen to him. Her father 'sold' her for 75,000 pounds since he was bankrupt and wealth, title and name would go to his son anyway. Actually he gave her the choice marry him or become a governess or travel companion to an old rich lady since he would not be able to support her anymore because she had scared off all her potential husbands. At least now I know that children called their parent mama and papa back then. The worst is that a sibling meant competition not 'friend'. I got told that I offered my brother a drink once it was said that I tried to dunk him in the toilet ;) 'Tom and Jerry' was tame compared to us but exterior threads would see us stick together against all odds.
Story setting Class Aristocracy might be more interesting but Middle class is probably more believable since it's closer to us. The age of the female cast doesn't matter as much since before 21 she is a child anyway and after 21 she is the 'property' of her husband and past 25 she might already be considered a spinster. In addition Aristocracy would be home schooled and a chance encounter after school couldn't happen. 6th form college sounds OK to me but it means at 18 they both are still kids.
Punishment at school First I wanted to start the story with a weird punishment at school for boys I read about some punishment practiced at American schools during Victorian times where the teacher would make a boy sit beside a girl. It mentioned boys were utterly afraid of cooties. When I checked a dictionary it didn't explain why that might make boys afraid of girls. Nonetheless it sounds like a weird form of punishment especially considering the alternate, the use of a cane.
At the moment I am looking for mean things a girl could do back then.
Any ideas? |