Literary critique/feedback wanted

Hi Defiant,
I already have one as part of the Alicia Chronicles which I should get around to posting later in the year. The legal director and her husband, returning from a dinner party discover their 18-year-old Swedish au-pair of is discovered asleep on the sofa with two empty bottles of wine on the adjacent table. There are a number of complications but Astrid eventually agrees to be spanked by the master of the household and then to receive the strap together with the lady of the household who receives her first-ever punishment. There are about a dozen parts of the Alicia saga to tell before we get to that stage.

I'd definitely be interested. I spent some time as an exchange student, and the stories I've read with that scenario have brought back fun memories, and "what if"s about what could have been if my host family had be...stricter ;).

I'm still figuring out the system here, apologies, feel free to message me, since I can't seem to find that button...If you're still taking critiques, I'm happy to give feedback, just let me know what kind you prefer.

-WB

To Defiant:

I have a tongue-in-cheek 'agony aunt' letter called 'Dear Ms. Bunny' (listed under 'letters') which may fit the bill.