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Blarg
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#1 | Posted: 9 Feb 2017 01:53
Not somebody pretending to be younger, or magically made young, just...somebody inevitably getting drawn into the role of being treated like a kid.

A shorter 18 year old boy going off to college and his landlady is a widow with four kids, and being around them he starts acting more like a kid, including managing to get himself into trouble with them. Her patience runs out a bit so she grounds him, but the behavior doesn't change, and her patience starts wearing thin again, and yeah he's eighteen, but he's small enough he doesn't even come up to her shoulder, and dammit she told him not to leave his shoes lying in the hallway. He's a good kid, but tries her patience and she just caught him admitting he snuck into a movie without paying...

Or...

An 18 year old girl witnessed a crime and goes to the home in another county of a middle-aged woman she used to work with two years before. She hides there and the woman decides the only way to avoid suspicion is for the girl to pretend to be her 14 year old niece (she's short and pretty petite) for a couple months. The girl always struck her as being fairly immature for her age, but it's just a couple months; how hard could it be to have a teenager in the house for a little while?

Or...

A college has a program placing freshmen with families looking to host a student. Tim, a fairly immature and rather small-for-his-age 18 y/o freshman boy, had hoped to get in on the wild dorm life that movies keep telling him about, but the college placed him with a tall, rather stout middle aged woman who spent 20 years as a 6th grade teacher before writing a bestselling book on adolescent behavior and retiring very early to a big rambling house in the suburbs near the college. She seems really nice, although she gets a little serious-minded when the subject of homework and grades comes up. He doesn't even come up to her shoulder, so when he leaves his bedroom a mess (after being told not once but three times to pick up after himself!) and she crosses her arms, gets a stern look on her face, and gives him a lecture about chores that starts with as long as you're living under my roof and ends with Do you understand me young man, he blushes beet red and mumbles "Yes ma'am." Lectures never fix things for long, though, and when school starts getting him to do his homework is like pulling teeth, and frankly her patience is running rather short...

So kind of a combination of that feeling of wondering if you're really too old to get it, and feeling like a disaster is ahead, and suddenly realizing that you're in trouble and boy is she mad, and wondering if you're at risk for getting it from somebody who isn't your parent, plus the feeling of losing whatever slight bit of adulthood you had and realizing that you're still a kid, you're gonna get treated like you're a kid, and you just crossed a line you shouldn't have crossed...

Some of the ageplay category of stories for purchase seemed to be like that from the description, so I was just wondering if there's much here in that vein among the free stories.

sandysadeyes
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#2 | Posted: 9 Feb 2017 16:33
That is my kink too. I have written some stories along these lines, but none so good to be posted. There was a blog previous called behindthemagicbox who had a number stories alike, but sadly it has closed down.

Glagla
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#3 | Posted: 9 Feb 2017 19:48
I'd say that there is more than just a few of these stories here - and all of the stories in the library are free to read. Right now there is a series "Olga settles in" that was upped some two weeks ago. It's the sequel to a story of a girl working undercover in a distant eastern Europe post war country and ending up having to flee, her identity forever mistaken for her too well made cover and now she has to start high school over in England I think it was, permanently stuck with her reduced age.

Burgundy
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#4 | Posted: 9 Feb 2017 19:56
Blarg:
I was just wondering if there's much here in that vein

Dude, you just wrote three excellent mini-stories in your post. Why aren't you an author? Write that shit up and send it in!

Goodgulf
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#5 | Posted: 10 Feb 2017 07:13
I've done a few "mistaken for younger" stories, but Imreadonly2 has done many more of them. You might check him out.

Often123
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#6 | Posted: 10 Feb 2017 22:57
Some good possibilities there, Blarg.

Glagla
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#7 | Posted: 11 Feb 2017 11:04
Hell, I'd pay to read about the 18 year old beauty who has to hide after she having witnessed a crime. That opens up endless opportunities for her having to comply to be treated as a kid in awkward situations involving frequent spankings. Go for it!

Tomatobottom
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#8 | Posted: 13 Feb 2017 06:47
You can also check Gloup's stories. A little age regression, a little mistaken identity and role reversal/power switch. I find them very interesting. I hope you'll like them as well.

sandysadeyes - I have also few stories but none of them are completed yet. Writing is actually a lot harder than I thought. And I want to take this opportunity to send my regards to all the writers here - without your fertile imagination and hard work, this library would never come this far. Please keep up the good work.

P.S. - I think DARING DIANE have some excellent stories on her blog (easy to search and find). Also you can find some C. Lakewood stories to your choice. (Links can be found on Diane's blog).

Glagla
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#9 | Posted: 13 Feb 2017 17:36
Tomatobottom:
You can also check Gloup's stories. A little age regression, a little mistaken identity and role reversal/power switch. I find them very interesting.

Why, that's awfully sweet of you Tomatobottom, I bow and thank. Yes, I must admit I have a certain weakness for women stumbling and accidentally slipping and falling headlong into a school uniform and then just have to act out the role of a person much younger than their age.

Sandysadeyes, please go ahead with your stories and then send out a cry for help in the forum. There is always one kind English speaking person or the other that offers themselves to help with proofreading. Try to start with a short story, 3000 words or less. My first attempts were so shitty that they couldn't be published, but since then my English has gradually improved somewhat. We all have to start somewhere.

Blarg
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#10 | Posted: 14 Feb 2017 06:53
Some of those mentioned above are pretty good. Some of them were a lot more into the age regression bit than I had meant; "ageplay" was not the best term for me to have used. More like cases where a young 18-20 year old or so finds out the hard way they're not so grown up as they think - preferably, for me at least, they find this out from somebody not in their family; that seems to be the most common scenario I come up with.

I guess one thing I look for is something that helps create a suspension of disbelief; something. To make the implausible seem plausible. I mean, the idea of an 18 year old guy getting put across his landlady's knee or a 19 year old girl pretending to be 15 for whatever reason, living with a middle aged woman and trying her patience badly enough that the woman turns the girl over her knee...well, this is not a particularly plausible scenario, but there are stories out there that deal successfully with even less plausible scenarios, and make them plausible.

I suppose you could make the story plausible one way or the other, depending on whether you showed a progression from the perspective of the younger person/adolescent/spankee, or the perspective of the adult/spanker.

Take the case of a story seen from the point of view of the younger person. Maybe they find themselves in a living situation with an older adult with kids...and they start realizing (gradually) they're still on the "kid" side of the adult/kid line. Not out of nowhere, though; their own behavior and the adult's response to that behavior makes it gradually clearer that they're still an adolescent, 18 or not. They repeatedly find themselves getting into trouble with the adult of the house - extremely minor things, at first, and gradually progressing. The adult usually treats them naturally as a teenager, not an adult, and establishes themselves as a dominant role without even thinking about it, and without making some point of it - it just happens naturally, because they're the adult and it's their house, after all - and the subject of the story just sort of falls into the situation. Maybe the situation is that they see the adult as an authority figure, and are afraid to outright defy the rules, and just find themselves going along with the rules the adult lays down...most of the time. They don't think much about it, but eventually they slip up in some minor way, getting a pretty minor scolding from the adult, but it reminds them out of the blue of their subordinate position, just a little. Probably just slightly embarrassing at first; nothing even close to serious...but the snowball keeps rolling. Probably the key with this type of story I suppose might be that the adolescent sees themselves slipping into being treated like a kid, but can't do anything about it. With every minor transgression, they see the adulthood they had assumed they had slipping away one little bit at a time, but they can't even complain because it usually really is their fault; either they weren't paying attention, or they thought they wouldn't get busted, and when they do get busted the embarrassment at knowing they earned the scolding (or more) makes them feel even more childish. So in this case, it's the adolescent that sees things snowballing.

Or take the opposite case, where the story progression is seen from the perspective of the adult. Maybe the idea of treating a young adult as anything other than an adult never even occurred to them. In that case, I suppose the key is to see their patience being worn thin over time by the increasingly obvious (and probably unforseen) immature behavior from the young adult, with a growing frustration and exasperation, combined with their being at a loss for how to deal with the situation. Perhaps the idea what she needs is to have to sleep on her stomach now and then just comes into their mind unbidden; the progression their would be to show them laughing and dismissing the idea as absurd, then gradually being worn down over time. Maybe the adolescent's immature behavior is all it takes to change their mind eventually, or maybe they run across some sort of parenting magazine with an article about how adolescents still need discipline, or maybe she runs into an old friend who reminds her that's it's her house and she needs to enforce the rules somehow. Maybe she's on the bus and overhears some older ladies talking about some crime committed by a teenager, talking about how a lack of discipline causes that sort of thing, etc. and so forth. Over time they're worn down, until the inevitable happens.

I suppose you could show a story from both perspectives, of course, showing a progression from both points of view. And of course you could show a story where neither side's views progressed; the adolescent's unstated view would be "Lol of course I'm too old for that; how is that even a question" and the adult's unstated view would be "Lol of course they aren't too old to get it; how is that even a question?" And nothing changes until The Inevitable occurs, and the Irresistible Force shows the Object they're considerably less Immovable than they had thought. That fourth category is fairly common, I suppose, and can give a good twist ending.

But I suppose what I'm looking for is stories where that progression occurs, and is seen by one party or the other, or both.

I'll stop rambling now. ;)

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