I'm glad I found this site. I've always been interested in writing, but my story that was posted on Nov 3, was the first piece of fiction I've written outside of a school setting. I think I have a good idea for an 8-part story worked out in my head and appreciate any comments that will help improve my writing. I have already submitted Part 2 of the story, and in my opinion, it's better than Part 1.
I'm working on Part 3 now, and by Part 5, the narrator will be in Viet Nam where there are lots of new ways to get in trouble and lots of new spanking implements waiting for him.
After the 8-part series is finished, I have ideas for a few side stories that will involve the characters from the series.
He're a link to a cute YouTube video that depicts the spanking implement mentioned in Part 1:
