catmama:
Since I don't write, I don't feel qualified to critique your work, so I just say how it affected me.
I don't think any of us should critique someone's work in a comment, Catmama. However, how it affected you is exactly what I'm looking for, and probably a bunch of other authors as well. You do a GREAT job on that part of it. Please keep up the great work. I love it.