Recently I've finished up a rewrite of a decade old three-parter called "Naughty Nymphs". It tells the tale of a young man who takes advantage of some very convenient circumstances and some very cute girls.
I decided to rewrite the story because the original suffered from bad writing and abused onomatopoeia. But the plot was fun and sound if clichéd. Because it's one of my few completed series (though only three parts) I'd love to hear what you all think of it, especially if you've read the original (for which I apologize if you have).
Thank you one and all,
-LK | 
