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MarkPhoenix
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#1 | Posted: 19 Dec 2011 23:16
As some of you may recall, I've mentioned that one of my favorite spanking authors is Will Henry. I also posted that I was worried that one story attempt was coming off as too close to copying his style. Now that I actually have a story posted here, I'm curious. Does "Double Down Spanking" bear any similarities to Will Henry's writing style? And if so, how much?

rollin
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USA
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#2 | Posted: 19 Dec 2011 23:34
I just looked at your story and I don't think you come off sounding like Will Henry. Henry had a distinct voice--the descriptions and dialog were very much out of the 1950's and yours sounds more modern. Also Henry hardly ever carried a single scene on for as long as you did. He'd typically devote a short chapter to an encounter, then move on to other characters. He either wrote anecdotally in a letters or psuedo-documentary style or he'd jump from character to character. He was big on groups---not individual relationships. Those are just a few differences I see.

 
 
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