I put in several of my recent stories, getting results that ranges from Grade 3 (Traveling Spankerman) to Grade 6 (What the Limo Driver Saw).
Looking at the description of the various indices - which calculate 'readability' based on length of words, length of sentences, and factors like that, I don't think that a low grade level in any way indicates 'immature' writing. In fact, the whole focus seems to be that simpler is better. Nothing really looks at vocabulary (other than through the simplistic measure of word length) or sentence structure (beyond sentence length), let alone the complexity of thoughts. Narrative writing SHOULD shy away from many long words and long sentences (I admittedly have trouble with the latter one). |