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One of the best, mainstream, short stories about spanking...

 
Goodgulf
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#1 | Posted: 4 Dec 2010 06:25
The subject line says it all.

http://nickelkid.net/docs/greats/refute_beelzy.html

With lines such as:
"I would have made her blush," said Mr. Carter, "in the proper part of her anatomy..."

It definitely has the best ending of any realist adult / child spanking story I've ever read.

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Redskinluver
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#2 | Posted: 4 Dec 2010 12:51
I have read this story. Agree that that is a good line, but Mr. Carter is not a very nice person at all. His relationship with his young son is hateful and abusive, which is why he meets a terrible fate at the end of the story.

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#3 | Posted: 5 Dec 2010 00:26
Exactly - which is why I feel it's "One of the best, mainstream, short stories about spanking" when children are involved.

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