My Very First Limerick

I've always loved limericks, but I've never written one, until now. I was performing a rather monotonous task at work today, and started putting words together in my head. By the time I finished work, a few hours later, I had revised my limerick four times. Hope you enjoy the results; it's a limerick about military discipline and keeping up morale

*ahem*

Private Peach, while preparing for battle
Professed she'd prefer to skedaddle
Sergeant Cherry O'Hare
Bent her over a chair
And painted Peach plum with her paddle

*takes bow*

That's awesome! Here's a piece of poetry of my own. I posted this on January 1, 2013 at LUDWIG'S ROHRSTOCK-PALAST. Its' not a limerick it's haiku. The rules for haiku are five syllable first line, seven syllable second line and back to five syllable's for the third and final line:

She hurts for arts sake.
Her pale canvas turned to red.
She's my masterpiece.

For more spanking haiku see Ludwig's and Kaelah's 12-28-2012 post.

RikSpanks



Great job, even more so as it is your first; I only hope you didn't embed this limerick inside your work somewhere. It happens, you know.

Here's another haiku. I think of it as a pervertible haiku, as only spankos would ever guess what it's really about:

Snow on Mount Fuji,
Then cherry blossom in spring;
Now, summer's roses.

Rik once was a limerick virgin,
With poetry skills just emergin'.
When he focused on spanks,
His readers gave thanks
For providing a pleasant diversion.

Well done, RikSpanks!

LOL Pervertible AND convertible! I enjoyed it.

Okay, this was quite a "fruitful" effort on your part, although I can't help but sympathize with Private Peach's feelings about going into combat...

--C.K.