My limericks predicament

I've gotten some nice comments on Girl From Brazil that I have to come clean. My limerick's writing needs a bit of work. The meter sees me coming.

Please note that our very special bunny helped me with this one. You'll notice some of the five liners I wrote ended up as poems, and that's because they would not meter correctly. da dum da da dum etc just doesn't see itself through.

I'm working on it. However, I can't sit by and read all those comments and not give credit where credit is due, especially since the bunny is very busy with other things. So it's by: Bendover and Flopsy.

Thank you darlin'

Pat

Well there's no harm in a bit of team work. Congratulations to you both, it was great.

This Brazilian wouldn't by chance be the Olympic bitchy beach volleyball player who was so unpleasant, would it? What a lovely thought! Poetic Justice at it's finest.

We could always think that it was, IC. What a lovely thought.