Quest

Unless you've registered there under your real name, why not ask? I'm sure you can't be the only one working on an adult text game. Just post something like "Hi. I'm working on an adult text game involving fanfic for <whatever> and I need people to bounce ideas off of as I work - anyone interested in helping?" and you'll probably get a response.

I'm taking about look at TADS - and as I work through it I'm having a bit of fun with it. For example, the example calls for:
+ Wearable 'plain pretty blue dress' 'blue dress'
"It's quite plain, but you think it pretty enough. "
wornBy = me

Which I changed to:
+ Wearable 'plain pretty blue dress' 'blue dress'
"It's quite plain, but you think it pretty enough - you just wish you had panties under it. "
wornBy = me

In short, I'm changing the example game to make it about spanking. If I can adopt the example game then maybe I'll take another shot at writing a adventure.

Goodgulf

I'm not quite sure, but you're recommending purging the story from every spanking element? This will be kind of complicated...

No - I'm recommending asking "Who wants to help me write a game that has spanking in it?" and seeing if you get any responses.

Odds are good that someone there will be into spanking. Spankos are everywhere.

Goodgulf

To be quite frank, I would like to avoid that at all cost. Rather than trying to get help from the Quest community, I'd rather have help from the spanking community, because my main worry is the writing quality, and this is why I'm here.

And, well, here, I'm asked to go seek help elsewhere, so that's not really encouraging.

Sorry - I thought you needed help with the game itself - not the descriptive bits.

I don't' have a huge amount of free time at the moment, but if you want I can look over your descriptive text.

Starting with what you posted on the blog:
There's a mistaken use of the word 'paddle'. While paddle can sometimes be used as a synonym for spank, you don't paddle someone with a belt. You could paddle with a hand, hairbrush, paddle, or something else that has paddle like qualities.
When using a belt...
When I caught her smoking I belted her pretty little backside.
When I caught her smoking I whipped her pretty little backside.
When I caught her smoking I spanked her pretty little backside with my belt.
When I caught her smoking I gave her a dozen licks with my belt.
When I caught her smoking I took off my belt and gave her a licking.
or, if the belt can be assumed (because you've just found the object in the game and typed "use belt on girl")
When I caught her smoking I gave her a licking.

Hope this helps!

Goodgulf

Well, I'm confident in my ability to code the game, but, yeah, the descriptions are the part worrying me.
And about that thing you mentioned, there's that little part here:
define object <Paddle>
alias <belt>

The object's name is paddle, but in fact, in the game, it's called a belt, and it's referred as a belt.
I started the game with a paddle, but after a while, I thought that it would be weird for someone to hang around with a paddle, so I renamed it a belt, and I rewrote the text. And because it was too troublesome to change every interaction, I just changed the displayed name on the game screen.
I guess I'll have to fix this definitely later. What I did was like putting a band-aid. It works temporary, but it does not fix the problem.