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Cal33
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#11 | Posted: 4 Apr 2012 15:17
Some sound advice here, especially regarding major vs minor characters. And Goodgulf provides an excellent example. In this case, showing involves the readers more - they actively draw their own conclusions, as opposed to passively being told that Jennie was excited.

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