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Goodgulf
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#11 | Posted: 19 Nov 2024 22:04
It seems that I've done several stories in this. The most "unfair" one is An Ugly Snippet. It's a very ugly story.

Other "unfair" spankings are included in the following stories. Maybe there are others that I missed? I'm not sure. 527 stories are a lot to look through.

An 'Accident' At School
Alternative Measures
Bubbles Goes Away
Cinderella & The Slave Girls
Do I Have A Spankable Bottom?
Guilty Conscience
In Defence Of A Friend
An Intolerant Apology
Late For Her Hearing
Legal Problem At The Beach
Letter Home From The Institute
The Look
The Magistrate - Part 1
The Magistrate - Part 2
The Ones Who Do Not Return
A Private College For Girls...
The Reporter
Right Is Right
A Tour Of The Facility [view series titles]
Wandering Away From The Tour

I hope you enjoy some of these.

thepreacherswife
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#12 | Posted: 20 Nov 2024 10:47
Goodgulf, I would have also included your "Solving the Problem", even though there isn't any actual spanking in it, just the conniving framing of a girl who will ultimately receive many physical punishments.

Glagla
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#13 | Posted: 20 Nov 2024 22:58
aka:
One thing I like about Gloup's approach to these styles (though others may not), is that the general tone of the stories are light-hearted and silly enough that I don't ever really feel bad about the whole thing. They come off as silly, ridiculous, and provocative rather than depressing or frustrating.

I think that was the sweetest thing anyone has ever said about my stories

Thanks,
Gloup

kdpierre
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#14 | Posted: 21 Nov 2024 14:23
Hmmm, I like Juanonone's too. And while I don't think mine are quite so blatant, a couple touch on an aspect of unfairness. I can't say these are so extreme as to claim "evil wins", but there certainly is an aspect of unfairness in each that might appeal to you. One playful one with a double story in it is "No Good Deed" where a guy ends up in trouble after intervening in a situation where he saw as unjust. The second story within it deals with a sympathetic sister who when presented with an opportunity begins to feel differently.

The other is "Schoolgirl's Spanking" which to be honest I never saw as unjust.......but many of my readers sure did! In fact, I can't think of any other story of mine that got as many negative comments from folks who seemed to really be bothered by what transpired. (You decide)

(Also, if you like 'dark stories', try the series "Becket Revisited". I can't say there are any aspects of injustice......but evil definitely wins in that one.)

JohnS47
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#15 | Posted: 22 Nov 2024 20:14
Checkout Little Sister's Paddle by John Strict

thepreacherswife
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#16 | Posted: 23 Nov 2024 00:49
JohnS47:
Checkout Little Sister's Paddle by John Strict

It's a very nice story (never read it before) but doesn't seem to fit the mold of really unfair and undeserving punishments with no purpose other than to inflict pain.

fatherjim
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#17 | Posted: 25 Nov 2024 23:00
I also find this type of story appealing. I love when the superheroine gets a sound and humiliating spanking, and the criminal gets away scot-free. Or when an innocent bystander steps in to stop a bully and gets perceived as the bully and is soundly punished.

I personally know of a real-life situation where a person paid someone to steal back something that was legally and rightfully theirs, only to get caught out, have the paid person rat them out and then they be punished for the attempt.

I call these stories reversal of fortune. A person tries to help an elderly old man and is unfairly punished by his family for being a gold-digger or for taking advantage of him. A young college girl tries to help find a missing student and breaks into the wrong home because the guy living there is creepy, and she gets caught and pays for her jump to a conclusion.

Another favorite is when a grown woman catches young boys egging an old man's house. She demands they hand over the eggs, they do, he appears, they scamper off, leaving her with egg on her face and a very sound spanking coming!

Of course, a Lara Croft type that always JUST ABOUT gets the treasure but ALWAYS gets the punishments, or three angry housewives go down to the local Strip joint to bust their sleazy husbands only to end up the night's entertainment for everyone's enjoyment!

A college girl and her three friends all try to be sleuths and all four run afoul of some really bad dudes with a sick sense of justice to teach these ladies a lesson! Well, that's a few ideas. Not original, I know, but surely others have some great ideas!

Thanks for bringing up the topic, however!

drkeate
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#18 | Posted: 28 Nov 2024 12:30
I certainly share your orientation. Most of my long Brotherhood series are intended to have happy endings for the heroines eventually, but I suspect I.ll be dead before I get there, so asthey stand evil is triumphant. Single stories A SchoolInspector Calls, Venetian Glass and Mrs Stephens Captures the Castle come close to what you want.
But inmy opinion the master of the triumph of evil spanking story is Abel.

mj2001
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#19 | Posted: 1 Dec 2024 02:43
I've done some stories over the years where the recipient is screwed over by those in authority over him/her, including the following (although the level of 'asshole-ness' varies by story):

Halftime Entertainment for Dad's Friends
His Lordship's Weekly Thrashings
Ivan the Heavy Handed
Lowest Test Score Loses
Mother is Disgraced
Okay, So Technically it was Blackmail
Price of Freedom
Sacrificial Lamb
Smoking is Stamped Out at St. Swithan's
Sunday After Church Whipping
Taken Prisoner in the Woods
Thrashing Miss Naomi
Unpleasant Memories
Wednesday Night Appointment with Nanny

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