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Gogotherapit
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Egypt
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#1 | Posted: 18 Nov 2024 08:55
I'm looking for some stories where there's no happy ending where justice prevail and The wronged are punished , instead i want some suggestions for stories like juanoneone stories (can't express enough how they're my FAVOURITE) and sone of Paris Annette Morreau's , flogmaster's Nymphette Juliette and that other story where a man is recalling all his spanking since his childhood up until his marriage (sry can't remember the name) , , you know where the Spankee is absolutely a Victim that gets no justice, i know i'm a minority in this preference but the idea of the evil winning is just my favourite, maybe it's my realistic nature that want stories shadowing our real world, or maybe it's a power trip seeing how those unfortunate fictional characters suffer just for me to read about it , who knows , however i'd appreciate your suggestions , thanks in advance ❤️

BashfulBob
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#2 | Posted: 18 Nov 2024 12:19
Not really my thing, but one series which may be what you are looking for that had me transfixed hoping that justice would eventually prevail was Withhold Not Correction by The Preacher's Wife.

myrkassi
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#3 | Posted: 18 Nov 2024 14:45
I agree there's something appealing about spankings that are (as one commenter put it) 'deliciously unfair'.

A few of mine - 'Alone Time', 'One Arabian Night', 'P.P.P.P.P.', and 'Practice' for example - qualify, though usually my 'victims' have either done something to deserve it, or get the chance to get their own back (and for my readers to enjoy a second spanking scene)!

Sir Cambornek

Howabout
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USA
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#4 | Posted: 18 Nov 2024 14:57
I agree with this inclination. My stories (LearningBare) are sometimes critiqued in the comments for being too unfair on the spankee, sometimes just form the humiliation delivered alongside the punishment but also sometimes from the whole situation being unjust, especially if the spankee hasn’t agreed to be punished.Recent stories falling into that last category are Visiting His Rich Family, Lingerie at a Bridal Shower, and A Too Small Bikini and an Angry Stranger.

thepreacherswife
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#5 | Posted: 18 Nov 2024 23:04
Thanks for the shout out Bashful Bob.

A few that stand out in my mind:

Horribly Unfair by Lawrence Kinden
Paige's Black Friday by Chip Wilson
Liberal Thinking by Grace Brackenridge
Things Change by Jennzshy

Not on this site is Haley Brimley's deliciously unfair "Big Sister" series. It can be found on soc.sexuality.spanking through Google Groups.

mobile_carrot
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England
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#6 | Posted: 18 Nov 2024 23:09
I've got a couple with maybe a disturbing ending - Barely Legal" and "Out Of My Mind" where there's an unredressed injustice and the narrator is arguably damaged by it all.

mobile_carrot
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England
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#7 | Posted: 18 Nov 2024 23:12
My author name for historical reasons is just Neil

CarolinaPaddler
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USA
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#8 | Posted: 19 Nov 2024 03:23
I believe you will really enjoy "The Cheerleader's Mistake." You can find it under my author's name, Cherry Red.

Hotspur
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South_Africa
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#9 | Posted: 19 Nov 2024 13:48
My story, "Hell Hath No Fury Like a Schoolgirl Scorned" fits into that category. Unfortunately klnowing that "evil wins" gives away the ending

aka
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USA
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#10 | Posted: 19 Nov 2024 15:40
A couple of Gloup's stories fall under this. Mid-Term Performance Review has some shades of this, though it's more "unfair" than necessarily "evil."

The Teacher Kick-Off Weekend, Veronica's Teaching Career. Dungeons and Dragons and Red Bottoms, A Superheroine is Born are all definitely evil wins.

Trading Places isn't so much evil wins, as a comedy of errors, but most of the spankings are still rather undeserved.

One thing I like about Gloup's approach to these styles (though others may not), is that the general tone of the stories are light-hearted and silly enough that I don't ever really feel bad about the whole thing. They come off as silly, ridiculous, and provocative rather than depressing or frustrating.

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