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Alef
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#21 | Posted: 13 Nov 2018 20:02
opb:
May I throw another name in the ring? Horatio Hornblower. Whilst he has all the characteristics of the hero in far too great quantities, even insofar as he detests anything in himself which might appear even a tiny bit self aggrandising, or even sympathetic. This in itself makes him an unlikeable hero, who, whilst we might root for him, we certainly wouldn't want to spend any time with him. I'm talking book-Hornblower, not TV series-Hornblower, played by the very likeable Ioan Gruffudd

That's one way of looking at it! I grew up with (book) Hornblower as my number one hero (ok, shared with Athos of The Three Musketeers and Pat Jennings of Tottenham), and I would have loved to spend time with him. To me he was a true hero even I could indentify with in all his physical clumsiness and self-doubt. Of course, I also hoped to have his unconscious appeal to woman ...

opb
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#22 | Posted: 13 Nov 2018 20:52
I always had a high regard for Pat Jennings too, he was always a bit overshadowed by the 'saving' Mr Banks (sorry). It's just as well that he was Irish or he'd have hardly played any internationals at all, like his contemporary Peter Bonetti whom I also admired greatly as a lad.

Alef
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#23 | Posted: 13 Nov 2018 21:13
I always had a high regard for Pat Jennings too, he was always a bit overshadowed by the 'saving' Mr Banks (sorry). It's just as well that he was Irish or he'd have hardly played any internationals at all, like his contemporary Peter Bonetti whom I also admired greatly as a lad.

I suppose we're side tracking a bit here, but still ... Bonetti was brilliantly and could make the most amazing saves, but he also had a tendency to make costly mistakes, didn't he?

Redskinluver
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#24 | Posted: 13 Nov 2018 22:13
Goodgulf
Really enjoyed reading the Spanking Lady on Patrol! Please write some more- see my comment for couple suggestions.
You said you couldnt use published heroes because of trademark issues. But there is a Wonder Woman story here by Beth(and my parody of the Lynda Carter Wonder Woman TV show theme song), not sure I understand.
While stories with real people are not permitted in the library, fanfiction type stories with fictional literary or TV characters are. My Xena story for example.

Glagla
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#25 | Posted: 13 Nov 2018 23:18
Redskinluver:
You said you couldn't use published heroes because of trademark issues.

...but it could be Wonder Lady, Wonder Madam, Wonderia Woman... the possibilities are endless. I have written a dozen superheroine spanking stories, but I've not been in the mood to upload any of them just yet. I'd love to read a few though.

galt54
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#26 | Posted: 14 Nov 2018 05:21
Redskinluver

I had a (my one and only so far) story published here in which the spankee was Eva Mendes (the actress - and I myself was the spanker!). So real people are permitted in the stories (Perhaps if they are fantastic and unrealistic enough? So that it is obvious that the text is fictional?).

The title of my story by the way, is "My Very Best Wet Dream Ever". It is the tale of how my dreams came true by dint of an unexpected visit by Eva Mendes to my humble home here in a suburb of Stockholm. The story is supposed to be humoristic in addition to being erotic.

Goodgulf
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#27 | Posted: 14 Nov 2018 07:38
Redskinluver:
Really enjoyed reading the Spanking Lady on Patrol! Please write some more- see my comment for couple suggestions.
You said you couldnt use published heroes because of trademark issues. But there is a Wonder Woman story here by Beth(and my parody of the Lynda Carter Wonder Woman TV show theme song), not sure I understand.
While stories with real people are not permitted in the library, fanfiction type stories with fictional literary or TV characters are. My Xena story for example.

This is odd, but I don't see a comment from you on that story.

Yes, I could get away with using trademarked names, writing FanFic, and I do have a couple of FanFic stories posted here (The Bamber series, a Jerry Cornelius one, a VR game based off of Nancy Drew maybe another one), but I find it hard to write good FanFic. I've tried and failed to get a good start on too many FanFics to try to make one work. It's hard to channel someone's else's characters in a way that works.

If I use Wonder Woman I'd need to get into the DC universe - and that has had so many reboots I don't know where to start. I'd need a good villain or two - more research - and I'd get bogged down in the details again.

And writing plausible superheroes who spank is hard for me to do, mostly because spanking is more of a villain thing. "The Spanking Lady" version I sent in was the second attempt to make that plot line work. In the first version The Spanking Lady's background got far, far too dark for me to go on.

Back on the topic of antiheroes, many of the spankers in the stories here could be considered antiheroes. Especially those who know they are giving unfair (or unearned) punishment spanking.

CrimsonKidCK
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#28 | Posted: 14 Nov 2018 08:03
Goodgulf:
If I use Wonder Woman I'd need to get into the DC universe - and that has had so many reboots I don't know where to start. I'd need a good villain or two - more research - and I'd get bogged down in the details again.

Ahhhh well, it's fanfiction after all, if you're comfortable with employing a hero/heroine from one comic company/universe and a villain/villainess from another, you certainly can.

If you wish to feature say the mid-1980s version of Wonder Woman, ignoring the later 'reboots,' I'd see no problem with that either.

Just include a good spanking scene or two though, please...

--C.K.

Glagla
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#29 | Posted: 14 Nov 2018 20:48
CrimsonKidCK:
Ahhhh well, it's fanfiction after all, if you're comfortable with employing a hero/heroine from one comic company/universe and a villain/villainess from another, you certainly can.

And as said, the parody comic books have worked around it by giving an identical looking superheroine with the exact same story and powers slightly tweaked names like Wonderous Woman, Wonder Lady, Wondera Woman, Wondrous Woman and so on... everyone will know who it is about anyway and it won't take away anything of the story. Go for it!

Goodgulf
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#30 | Posted: 15 Nov 2018 03:50
Alas, there are times I tend to be detail oriented. Example: I was writing a story set in the past where the phases of the moon and dates from then current affairs played a big role. Then I discovered that I had taken the moon phases from the wrong year. I spent some time trying to untangle the plot, shifting the moon phases to the right ones but I had the right dates for the current events. I finally gave up on it.

I know what you're thinking - no one would know or care when the full moon really was. Just as almost no one would notice if I shifted the dates for the then current events - but I would know and I could make that story work for me knowing that those details were wrong.

I filled several pages with notes when I did a story about a game set in Nancy Drew's world, finding an obscure part of her hometown where there was high crime / low income people (a place written out of later editions), and I don't think that anyone noticed - but I knew those details were right. It's hard to get realism in a spanking story so there are times I go for verisimilitude by adding details like those.

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