RosieCheeks:
Thank you for your feedback, from a author to a reader, i am most honoured.
My nick is adorable but the rest of me isn't too bad either, in the right light, squinting slightly.........
Would it also help if a guy had imbibed several shots of vodka first?
Ummmm, just kidding there, cyber-cousin, I'm certain that your screen name is accurate four times over and thus you're quite cute--I always envision my feminine Library colleagues as being very attractive.
Regarding the issue at hand, I do wish that there were some way to have an easy-to-follow, multi-party discussion about any particular story, even though I have enjoyed the two-party 'pop-up' conversations which I've had about stories (theirs or mine) with various members of this Library. (That was an advantage of the spanking-oriented newsgroups I used to post on, although there were often problems with a paucity of comments on numerous stories.)
On infrequent occasions, I have posted a 'follow-up' comment to a story I'd earlier commented on, responding to someone else's commentary (after my first comment), but that's not a highly effective way of discussing the literary issues involved, since it counts on any 'follow-up' comments being noticed by interested parties (most likely earlier commenters), which they might not be.
This appears to be a rather tricky issue...

--C.K.