Minidancer:
it's my story...and i want to be responsible for it from start to finish.
I think this is a bit of a simplistic approach. Without taking anything away or adding anything to the author's work (ie. just providing opinions, not actual editing) a third party with an objective eye can provide significant value. We do this all the time in marketing where we preview work with trusted advisors like analysts. A small bit of insight can make a power full impact:
eg:
- perhaps the author missed an opportunity, at the expense of writing one small but powerful paragraph to create an erotic scene or develop some sexual tension arising from the result of an action (ie: spanking)
- perhaps there is too much text - white-space and section headings might help
- perhaps the author hasn't targeted a particular reader type/genre enough and the message is too bland for anyone. A smaller target audience and some focused 'messaging' and the same tuned piece can resonate amazingly
Anyway, each to their own. I don't do it often, but with a good reviewer (not editor!) the benefits can make all the difference