I hadn't written a story in a long time before writing and submitting this one. It all spilled out of my head and into text within the time span of less than an hour total. I would really like to hear some feedback, either positive or negative about what you all thought of it. (I know this looks tantalizingly close to begging for story comments, but.....) What did you like and what didn't take? If I was to write more like it, what else would you want to see? This was the first time I ever wrote a story without actually having the spanking in it. It's kind if an honor to have finally gotten the big "O". Thoughts here or comments on the story would be very very much appreciated. Please and thank you in advance! |