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yankee
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#41 | Posted: 21 Nov 2016 02:22
Kid. You are a strong word smith. You make valid points. I will not try to contradict you. My point is Lily really gets it good. And I enjoy it.

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#42 | Posted: 23 Nov 2016 01:44
Another "hardest part" to write for me is the sex, when the spanking leads to it. Not really my strength at all, so I usually gloss over it. (Which is in line with the site's guidelines anyhow -- but others handle it better than I do for sure.)

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#43 | Posted: 23 Nov 2016 02:01
Oh yeah, totally agreed about sex scenes being hard to write. It seems to be difficult for ALL authors, including really superior famous ones (emphasis on 'superior', I'm not referring to the cretinous fifty-shades sex scenes here).

A few of my characters are very foul-mouthed, so there's lots of f-words and such in my stories (only within those characters' dialogue and inner thoughts), but paradoxically, I absolutely do not want to write a foul-mouthed sex scene (and I haven't). Using lots of porny words for private parts and coarse phrases for describing the action, no, ew. It would feel like I'm transcribing a porn video. Usually when I write a sex scene, I try to write it sort of elliptically, so it feels kind of vague. So that it specifically won't read like a play-by-play script for a porn video.

One of the most realistic sex scenes I've ever come across in any book went pretty much as follows:
Her: "Urk..."
Him: "Hrrmphh!"
Her: "Eeeeeee..."

How can I compete with that?

CrimsonKidCK
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#44 | Posted: 27 Nov 2016 21:07
RosieRad:
Another "hardest part" to write for me is the sex, when the spanking leads to it. Not really my strength at all, so I usually gloss over it. (Which is in line with the site's guidelines anyhow -- but others handle it better than I do for sure.)

Well, I pretty much agree with this approach, since in an account supposedly focused on spanking there normally shouldn't be a need for any in-depth description of a sex scene, even if/when one follows naturally from the bottom-blistering action.

In my experience, if an author who normally doesn't write about spankings does end up describing one involving adults (or even teenage minors) who are potential erotic partners, he/she apparently feels it should be followed up by "mind-blowing sex" which has to be described in considerable detail, usually more than was employed in describing the spanking itself.

However, I'd venture that spanking-oriented authors typically should avoid employing extensive non-kinky sexuality in their writing anyway...

--C.K.

yankee
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#45 | Posted: 28 Nov 2016 02:27
KId. After spanking me, You gave it good to Rosie. Regards. Donald.

Burgundy
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#46 | Posted: 28 Nov 2016 03:19
Dude, what are you ON?

(Go on, delete me - delete me harder...)

Goodgulf
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#47 | Posted: 28 Nov 2016 03:40
mj2001:
Also, to expedite things, I created a file of character names. It's hard for me to think up decent names while I'm writing the story, so I leave the names as xxx and fill them in afterwards. I've got a list of complete names I've heard/seen that I liked, but I've also got first and last names I can play mix and match with until I find a name I like. I started doing this after I submitted 2 totally unrelated stories the same week and then realized they both had a protagonist named "Maddy."

I too need a file of names, but I tend to list the main characters before I start, adding to that list if I need to. I've found that imdb can be a friend - combine an actress's first name with her character's last name and you've got a combination that fits her ethnic type. Unless it's a scfi or fantasy movie, because "Tanya Grxxx" doesn't fit in most settings.

Writing the spanking itself... It gets repetitive. Sometimes I'll start with where individual smacks are landing, but I can't do that for the entire spanking. Usually, with a right handed spanker and the spankee laying with her face to the left I'll have the first smack land on the right bottom check.

Another difficulty I have is with endings. I often milk the situation, drawing things out, leading to further spankings and reactions to spankings.

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#48 | Posted: 28 Nov 2016 20:02
yankee:
KId. After spanking me, You gave it good to Rosie. Regards. Donald.

Well, in my response to your earlier post about that F/F spanking video clip, I was merely expressing a perspective on one aspect of it (Lily's degree of cooperation in being spanked) which was quite different from yours, thus my response was meant to express an opposing viewpoint but not to be confrontational.

As for RosieRad's post about describing directly sexual activities within spanking-oriented stories, my responding one was in agreement with hers and simply elaborated on her basic point a touch.

On that topic, I will add that (in my experience anyway) it's generally not that difficult to determine when a "spanking story" has been written by an author who's not *into* our kink him/herself, since it tends to end up focusing on straight sexuality...

--C.K.

RosieRad
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#49 | Posted: 29 Nov 2016 05:53
I didn't read CK's comment as criticism. FWIW.

Goodgulf
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#50 | Posted: 30 Nov 2016 04:48
Another hard part to write - wardrobe.

Wikipedia is your friend when it comes to finding the right word to describe clothing, be it a demi bra, minimizer bra, or a shelf bra.

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