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I need a volunteer to read some storylines I have written

 
BlooDenim
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#1 | Posted: 5 Jan 2018 11:42
I haven't written anything recently and I am very self-conscious as I read lots and am mostly awed by better writers, but I have a series, if you could call it that of snapshots from a female American teen spankees life. There are many short stories, a diary and some scenarios.
Before I inflict them on the general public I would like some advice on how to set them out and whether my style is readable?
Anyone?

thepreacherswife
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#2 | Posted: 5 Jan 2018 15:26
Happy to take a look and offer suggestions, but there are far more prolific writers here than me.

flopsybunny
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#3 | Posted: 5 Jan 2018 18:35
Hi BlooDenim
I'd suggest you check out the author guide too. You can find it here:
http://www.thespankinglibrary.org/index.php?func=about&view=aut

warthur
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#4 | Posted: 6 Jan 2018 18:20
I would also be happy to take a quick look at what you have and make a few suggestions. Please keep in mind that the teen needs to be at least 18 (in the US). Good luck.

Artofzee
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#5 | Posted: 8 Jan 2018 10:29
I have time now to do a little reading. If you care to, send along your favorite of the stories.

BlooDenim
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#6 | Posted: 8 Jan 2018 10:39
flopsybunny:
Hi BlooDenim
I'd suggest you check out the author guide too. You can find it here:
http://www.thespankinglibrary.org/index.php?func=about&view=aut

Thanks Flopsy.
I think that is essential, but later, I need critique.
xx

BlooDenim
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#7 | Posted: 8 Jan 2018 10:47
thepreacherswife:
Happy to take a look and offer suggestions, but there are far more prolific writers here than me.

Artofzee:
I have time now to do a little reading. If you care to, send along your favorite of the stories.

warthur:
I would also be happy to take a quick look at what you have and make a few suggestions. Please keep in mind that the teen needs to be at least 18 (in the US). Good luck.

Thank you all very much for the offers. I have agreed to let PhilK cast a ceritical eye over them for now as we have met.
warthur I am very careful, trust me, I don't do or like underage stories.

Redskinluver
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#8 | Posted: 8 Jan 2018 14:58
warthur

Have a clarification to what you said about age. The library does not permit stories with any sexual content involving persons under 18. And I totally support that.
There are plenty stories here with bratty teens ending up with red, sore bottoms. Have written some myself.

 
 
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