I think changing writing styles is an interesting issue. Educators have finally figured out how to teach writing, and help kids grow as writers and this community is a perfect example. Now-in a writing class or here on the site getting ready to comment, when reviewing a piece of writing, the reviewer can considers organization of the piece. Is there a beginning middle and end, paragraphs arranged in logical order... the next are ideas what's the author's message, is it clear, is the message interesting- worth reading? The next is the most important for us and our readers, sentence fluency.Do sentences vary in length, do they all begin the same- that's an issue for students, all the sentences begin with "I" or "the" and sentences are the heart of the piece. If they flow and are not awkward- they are pleasing to the reader. Reading the piece is not a chore- and you know what I mean by that. The next is voice, does the writer sound like herself. Huckleberry Finn does not sound like Jane Eyre. Each has different goals, a different set of experiences and priorities, lives in a different society and time. The kids in the tree house and the corporation executive do not use the same examples, eat the same food, get spanked for the same offenses- well maybe they do share a few bad habits. The last two are word choice and conventions words add texture and interest and over used words are tiresome. Looking for a better way to describe the spankee's tush is worth exploring. Using lovely metaphors, outrageous comparisons- now I'm getting carried away. So, yes, a writer will change one or more traits depending on subject, purpose, audience... I hope you aren't asleep. I wasn't taught to write this way. Writing was all about grammar and punctuation and where I grew up that was a big deal, because we was's and the double negatives flowed like water from the fire hydrant on a hot summer day. Sorry, another lapse of language. Now writing is more collaborative; the storyboard and role playing over at the bottom line are great ways to experiment with your style. |