One word I absolutely hate in an otherwise excellent story is the word 'cunt' to describe female genitalia. It has me cringing every time with it's crass vulgarity and jolts me out of the enjoyment of the story. I agree that "one eyed trouser snake" and bb's "little captain" are delightful descriptions for the male appendage! As far as describing female anatomy is concerned it has often been said that Coleridge's poem Kubla Khan is also a metaphor for the female genitalia and the sexual act itself. I have included the first excerpt from it here... see what you think!!
Kubla Khan By Samuel Taylor Coleridge
In Xanadu did Kublai Khan A stately Pleasure-Dome decree, Where Alph, the sacred river ran Through caverns measureless to man Down to a sunless sea.
So twice five miles of fertile ground With walls and towers was girdled 'round, And there were gardens bright with sinuous rills, Where blossomed many an incense-bearing tree; And here were forests ancient as the hills, Enfolding sunny spots of greenery.
But, oh! That deep, romantic chasm which slanted Down the green hill, athwart a cedarn cover: A savage place! As holy and enchanted As e'er beneath the waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her Demon Lover! And from this chasm with ceaseless turmoil seething, As if this Earth in fast, thick pants were breathing, A mighty fountain momently was forced, Amid whose swift, half-intermitted burst Huge fragments vaulted like rebounding hail, Or chaffy grain beneath the thresher's flail;......etc |